Sunday, January 25, 2015

Picture Book Draft



Cassi Land
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Ela Draft, Picture Book

1: The Black Forest was filled with many wonders.  The thick trees provided shelter for the animals inside it.
2: However, the animals were miserable.  They were some of the most unique animals in the world, but they had erupted in fighting chaos and no longer knew how to get along. 
3: They would steal each other’s food and shelter.  They made each animal feel far worse than the next. 
4: One day a lovely bald eagle moved into the forest.  She was just about to have her first baby eagle and could not wait to meet all the friendly faces of the forest. 
5: Yet when she arrived she was greeted with unfriendly glares and faces.  She saw all the animals around her competing for food and shelter.  She saw many sad and alone animals. 
6: She could not stand their misery.  She decided to fly down to the forest floor to help the other animals.  She spotted a bear cub, overflowing with fish and no room the carry it. 
7:”Can I help you?” Said the eagle excitedly.  The cub looked scared and confused. 
“I have heard of these tricks before.  My mother told me never to fall for them,” The cub said angrily. 
8: The bald eagle looked at the small cub walk away.  She frowned and flew back up to her nest.  She had a good idea. 
9: The next day she brought her nest down to the forest floor and awaited the cubs arrival.  She finally saw the cub after hours of waiting.  He quickly scurried to scurry away with all his fish tangled in his paws and mouth. 
10: “No!  Wait!”  Cried the bald eagle.  “I have come to give you my basket so you have a place to carry your food in!”  The cub grabbed the basket and dropped his fish inside and left without saying thank you.  Even though the bald eagle no longer had shelter, she was happy to help the cub. 
11: On her way back to her branch, she spotted a blue jay looking for a good spot to place her nest for her baby blue jays. 
12: The blue jay noticed that she was being watched and began to fly away scared and angry.  “No!  Wait!”  The eagle cried out.  “I have a lovely spot upon a branch on this same exact tree!”  Exclaimed the eagle. 
“I have heard of these tricks before.  I was taught never to fall for them.” Said the blue jay.  “I do not need your help.”
“Please just take my spot on the tree it is the only thing I can do to help. “  Said the bald eagle cheerfully.  She waved goodbye as the blue jay took her spot on the tree.  Even though she did not have a branch to rest her baby egg on, or put her nest on, she felt happy to help. 
13: On her way to find food and a place to sleep, she spotted a fish that was out of water.  “Oh my!”  Cried the eagle.  The fish began to trash and gasp, he was very scared.  If she did not help him, he would surely die.  “Do not touch me!  I have heard of these tricks before and I promised never to fall for them.”  Said the fish quietly. 
“Not to worry.  I have an idea!”  The eagle said proudly.  The eagle took the twigs she had been using for a new nest and fashioned a raft.  She slid the fish onto the raft and pushed him back out onto the river.  Even though she did not have twigs for a nest she still felt happy to know the fish was safe. 
14: As she began to collect more twigs, she realized it was dark in the forest, and she was lost.  She cried out for help but none of the animals came.  She felt sad. 
15: When the morning came, the eagle decided it was time to leave the Black Forest.  She packed her babies egg on her back and waved goodbye to the forest. 
16: She waved goodbye to her tree, she waved goodbye to her nest, and she waved goodbye to her twigs. 
17: But just as she was about to leave she saw something odd happen.  She saw all the animals down by the river helping each other carry food and find shelter.  The bald eagle smiled to herself, happy that she had made the unfriendly forest friendly. 
18: And just as she was about to leave, knowing she had done a good job, the animals called her name. 
“Bald eagle!  Bald eagle!”  Cried the cub. 
“Please don’t leave!”  Chirped the blue jay. 
“We made you something,”  Gasped the fish.  All the animals in the forest presented her with a huge nest, filled with food for her and her baby eagle.  The bald eagle smiled widely for she knew she had made all the animals happy.  And they had made her happy too. 

Tuesday, January 20, 2015

Authours Note:
This book was written to show how greatly a small act of kindness can be appreciated. It is impossible to know what one individual is going through and a helpful stranger may give them a glimpse of happiness and change their perspective on the terrible things that go on in the world. This was based of of my social awareness project where i interviewed Ssisi Land, who is friendly to whomever she meets and is willing to help anyone.
Throughout the book the bald eagle helps all the forest animals with their troubles, but they do not show their appreciation for her deeds. When she decides to move to a kinder forest the animals decide they do not want to lose such a kind soul. They offer her food, a better shelter and a better way to navigate her way through the forest.
The reason I chose the bald eagle was due to the fact that they can seem very intimidating but things are not always what they seem. Bald eagles are mean creatures but not everything must be so stereotypical. The bald eagle ends up showing all the forest animals how different she is.
The forest I chose to base my story off of is called the Black Forest in Germany. Just the name of the forest sounds friendly, but the eagle helps to brighten it and change the forest for all the animals.

Written by Cassi Land